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If I DieIf I die,
Please don't cry.
Look up at the sky,
And say goodbye.

Close your eyes,
Raise your voice,
Kiss your fingers,
And reach up high.

If I dead and gone,
Six feet under,
Nailed in a box,
To never see tomorrow.

If I die,
Don't you dare cry.
Open your eyes,
And smile wide.

If I die,
If I fall asleep to never wake,
Don't curl up,
Don't let it hurt you.

If I die,
Please don't cry.
Look up at the sky,
And say goodbye.
My Smile Was Birthed From The Ashes Of PainThis smile you see,
Is made of broken hearts,
Of broken hopes,
Of broken promises.

This laugh you hear,
That rings loud and true,
Came from a chest that's been stabbed,
Both in the back and heart.

If you hurt me,
If you leave a scar,
I will simply smile,
And skip away.

I bet your wondering,
Why?!
What sort of sicko would laugh at pain,
Smile in the face of misery?

The sort of person who would do that,
Is a strong one.
One who believes that happiness can,
And will be found.

This person,
Let's hope fill their wounds,
Let's their smile be a sign of forgiveness,
For what you have done,
And a sign,
That there is better to
A Reason To Smile
Shush now,
Settle down,
Listen please.

This is,
About the one I love,
The one I love,
With all my heart.

Listen up,
I'm about to tell you somethings,
Which are dear to me,
Listen please.

He has,
This amazing smile,
That lights up,
The whole damn sky.

He laughs out loud,
Like there is nothing dark,
Inside his heart,
Or way out there in the deep blue sky.

He makes the sun,
Pale in comparison,
To his happy ways,
His happy days.

He lights up my sadness,
He scares away any fear,
He makes monsters,
Really seem like fairy tale characters.

He makes this life,
Once so dull, such a chore,
Sparkle in sunshine,
He gives me a
HarmonyIt's been hell not having you here,
I've been missing you so bad,
And even though I ask again and again for you to be by my side,
You're still so far away.

I beg and I plead,
I ask for your love,
And though you give me as much as you can,
The love you send me has died before arrival.

I spend my days thinking of you,
My nights crying for you,
My heart beats only for you,
My smile only exists with you there.

I'm addicted to the song lyrics which describe how I feel,
Singing along to a song that's in beat with my heart,
I hope you can hear me sing,
Those sweet sweet words I long for you to hear.

I don't sing often,
And when I do
Forgiveness
Sat in this corner,
For all to see,
This weak little monster,
That i call me.

I hide in the shadows,
Only show the the good,
In the hope you won't shine a light,
On all that is hidden around.

I skulk in the darkness,
I hide my pain.
I show you my laughter,
As my tears fade away.

In the hope of redemption,
I only show what is good,
Like the monster i am,
I keep drawing blood.

Although i beg for forgiveness,
Although i am on my hands and knees,
It's all for nothing,
This hiding and lying.

For although i may do good,
And beg all around for you to accept my apology,
How can some one ask,
And expect forgiveness,

When they h
My Happy PlaceI walked along the wall, which seperated the grass from the walk way through the park, right next to the cathedral. It was dark out, even though it was barely five o'clock in the afternoon yet. The grey clouds shadowed the sky, blocking the stars from my sight but also cushioning the air so it was warm enough to walk around without shivering. The orange glow from the artifical lights lit up pools of the world, making it so i can see you behind me, your shadow illuminated for me to see.
I skipped along the wall, jumping down the ledges, heading for one certain place. You know where we are going too, I know you do. I smile, feeling blissful.
Tearing Me ApartThe suns falling down,
The moons rising up,
Like the angel in your nightmares,
Breaking through to you.

If there's one thing i can't stand,
It's a slowly breaking heart,
The pain i see in your eyes,
It's tearing me apart.

In the unholy land,
There's a darkened life,
A life we can all choose,
If we are too far gone.

Is there some one out there?
Some one far away,
Laughing in the sunshine,
Whilst i cry in the rain.

Will you break it down now,
This wall you built around,
To protect me from the outside,
From the blackened souls.

Can you hold my hand now,
Shield me from the cold,
Wrap me in your arms girl,
All i want is home
Your Forever Is All That I NeedPlease,
Please stay forever with me.
Please reach out and take this hand that I offer you,
And let me pull you close.

I lay in my bed at night,
I toss one way,
I toss another,
Then my mind wanders to the dreams I make up in my fantasies.

They say forever is all you can ask for,
And your forever is all i need,
Please,
Please stay forever with me.

As long as you are near me,
I know it'll all be okay,
S'long as I can hold you,
I'll let the world spin another day.

You've been away a long time,
How the hell did you ever pick me?
No words can describe how you make me feel,
I fell in love and dammit I just can't climb back out.

M
Ice QueenI feel cold.
I feel empty.
I feel alone.
I feel dead.

I feel like I'm locked in a coffin,
I can never escape,
The world pressing down on me,
Crushing my spirit to death.

I feel like I'm bound to this pain,
No matter what i do,
Like there's some one stood out there,
Holding the key and laughing at me.

No matter what i think,
I can't change my mind,
I'm alone in this world,
I can no longer put up a fight.

Your kind words fall dead,
Your warmth just dies,
Before i can feel it's embrace,
Upon my frozen skin.

I'm dead inside,
I'm too far gone,
I've frozen shut,
All of my emotions and love.

I've no room for happiness,
In th
Everything You WantedThere's one door falling closed,
Another one's flying open,
Lighting up the darkness,
In this never ending nightmare.

One more good bye,
One more quiet cry,
Is anybody out there?
Does anybody care?

Put your hand up right now,
Is all I'm waiting for.
Times breaking down,
And everyones fallen.

Is everything you wanted,
Everything i can give you?
Some people demand an answer,
Some people just don't know.

Sometimes we're holy angels,
Floating up high,
But sometimes life drags us down,
And kills our very souls.

Are you somewhere out there?
Somewhere far away,
Waiting for my smile to come,
And break all these spells.

Can i t
Sent From Up AboveHold me in your arms girl,
Twirl to the music with me,
Let me see that smile girl,
Help me see.

See the sunlight in the leaves,
See the twinkle in your eyes,
See the happiness in the world,
And the greenness of the grass.

Help me see the darkness,
Wrapping round my soul,
Help me break these chains girl,
Binding me to evil.

Laugh so har dit hurts girl,
Laugh until you cry,
Cos if you ever stop laughing girl,
I think i might just die.

Don't ever slow down now,
Run as fast as you can,
It's not like your lost girl,
You found me like an angel,
Sent from up above.
My PromisesThese cuts on my arm,
Are the last of there kind,
Because i made promises,
On the 23rd of June.

I was told,
'Be strong for those who are broken and cannot help themselves up.
Be strong for yourself so you can pick yourself up again,
No matter how far you fall.
Feel strong knowing there are people who want you to live,
Without ever knowing you but through your work.
Feel strong knowing there are always people,
Who will want you to live even if you don't.
Remember only the good things in your life,
No matter how hard it may seem..
If you break something remember that all things will break at one time or another,
And can be fixed
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SunsetAnother lonely day,
You've gone away,
I'm left alone,
I guess i should be used to this by now...

It's my own fault,
I pushed you away,
As far as i could...
But baby,
You have too see,
If i could,
I would give you my entire world.

I push you away,
You pull me close,
I want this so bad...
But i can't hurt you no more.

Go your own way,
Walk into the sunset without me,
This darkness is where i am supposed to be.

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It's simply not all fairy tales and unicorns,
Sometimes,
It's putting their well being and happiness before yourself.

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Who's Laughing Now

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A smile on my face,
A stake in your heart,
A skip in my step,
Blood on my hands,
As I dance away,
Leaving you to die.

My goal for you,
So beautifully simple,
Is to make sure you pass away screaming,
Into the afterlife you go,
Terror in your eyes,
Your blackened soul burning up.

Your body will disappear,
Never to be found,
Do you think your mummy will cry?
For their lost daughter,
Who's existence and life,
Simply melted away.

Are you scared?
Are you simply....Terrified?
Scared you'll be forgotten,
Your pathetic life worthless to everyone,
Only remembered,
As a victim,
Of a the psychopathic serial killer that got away?

You never saw this coming did you...
Ha Ha Ha...
Thought of the threats I screamed as empty,
You saw it all as a joke,
All of my pain and suffering,
All of my tears weren't worth your precious time.

Well.
Who's laughing now

Ha...Ha...Ha...


Ha...Ha...Ha...


Ha...Ha...Ha...


Ha...Ha...Ha...

Ha...Ha...Ha...
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I wrote this a while ago.
It's not often i show you guys my violent physco side. So here's a glimpse.

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Critique by *Using0nlycaps Dec 1, 2012, 12:08:16 PM
WOW! i know your lovley side, and i thought 'there's another poem from Jet!' and came to read it then i was like 'O.O wow. this is something deep!' and i love it. in this i see somebody literally skipping away from a screaming body, and a tear-less mother standing at an empty grave. the first few lines give you the impression that it'll almost be a comparison between you and the 'victim' someday i wanna write like you ;u; you are an inspiration to me, and i hope you keep writing! you inspire me, and i don't want you to change your style (unless you rfind one that suits you better :D)
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Critique by ~SilverShadowPheonix Dec 1, 2012, 11:40:26 AM
Very powerful A dark glimpse of the mind ranting after committing the deed it threatened to do. A dark action is depicted beautifully. It's begins sounding like a victor sending a vampire away to damnation. Perhaps the person in question was a "vampire" to him. He is happy that he accomplished his task as he goes on his way. However, you can feel the poet regretting what he has done as his laughter fades away in the final lines. He hasn't taken away his problems. He has only sent away a mother's only child to temporarily ease his own suffering.
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~Contradictory55 Dec 1, 2012  Student Writer
Despite its maniacal feel, it also feels so lonely... :tighthug:
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*JetBlackHeartxxx Mar 8, 2013  Student Writer
Yeah...i know what you mean
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~Contradictory55 Mar 9, 2013  Student Writer
:glomp:
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~graveyardancing45 Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
RESPECT
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*JetBlackHeartxxx Dec 1, 2012  Student Writer
whatever for?
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~SilverShadowPheonix Dec 1, 2012
wonderfully done
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*JetBlackHeartxxx Dec 1, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks! :dummy::heart:
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~SilverShadowPheonix Dec 1, 2012
thank you
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*JetBlackHeartxxx Dec 1, 2012  Student Writer
why are you thanking me?
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~SilverShadowPheonix Dec 1, 2012
for this amazing work.
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