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Just Hug Me

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No words are needed,
The silence speaks for itself,
There is no need to form those words,
That you feel the need to say.

I can tell from you actions,
The small smile on your lips,
The twinkle in your eyes,
The skip in your step.

I can tell from the tears,
The broken heart,
The way you grip my hand tight,
The darkness in your soul.

I can tell from the knitted eyebrows,
You head cocked to the side,
Your mouth forming the question why,
The way your brain is working overtime.

I can tell by the shuffling in your step,
The clicking of your fingers,
The biting of your lip,
The feet that point inwards.

I can tell from your wide eyes,
Your limp form,
Your open mouth,
Your frozen eyes.

I can tell from the clenched fists,
The sharp movements,
The vibrating of your body,
The glare from your soul.

I can tell your mood,
From the way you move,
There is no need to speak,
I know exactly what you are going to say.

Sometimes the best way to say something,
Is to say nothing at all.
Nothing needs to be said,
Just hug me.
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PercyJacksonRules123's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I felt the need to compliment this.
Well, I'd seen these type of themes for writing before, so the originality is dialed down just a bit. It's just the way that you wrote it made it different. Writing these type of poems are hard and takes time.
Your technique is good: how you change a different emotion for each stanza, and to top it all off at the end, you told us what the silence and emotions meant, and what the person wanted.
The impact was great on me. It was as if I were being hit in the heart all at once, and this fuzzy feeling traveled through me and sent me off the edge. Seeing through silence and body language, and THEN actually writing it into a poem is very difficult. I know because I've tried before. But anyway, this poem effected me, and thanks to you, I know when somebody needs a hug. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="38" height="15" alt=":hug:" title="Hug"/>