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I'm fine.
I'm always fine.
I'm sorry if I am acting odd,
But honestly, I'm fine.


She looks away when you catch her eye,
Asks you how you are,
Even though you have just asked the same...
Does this not seem strange?

She acts like being fine,
Is all part of the job description,
She bottles it up inside,
I wonder what she hides.

She sits down and listens to your problems,
Listens and thinks intently,
But have you not seen that far off look in her eyes,
That appears every once in a while?

It never stays for long,
Pops in then straight back out,
Sometimes she has to shake herself,
To bring her thoughts back to reality.

Do you ever notice,
How she never says whats truly on her mind?
Does it worry you?
Keep you up at night?

Her skirt it twirls,
In the midnight sun,
As she spins around,
Never letting you see what she holds.

When you get an honest answer,
When she can look you in the eye,
When you ask how are you,
And do not recieve a lie.

Only then will you truly know her,
Have finally gained her trust.
This hidden beauty till then,
Will walk away into the dusk.

I'm okay, I'm fine,
Do not fret.
Honestly...
she whispers,
I'm honestly okay.
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JetBlackHeart
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DeadSkarlett Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
pretty <3
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JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks <3
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DeadSkarlett Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
yw <3
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OneMidnightRose Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
you sing the same song as i do...
your poem is beautiful :heart: you had me think so much of myself...
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JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much :heart:
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OneMidnightRose Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
^ ^ you are welcome :hug:
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JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Student Writer
teehee :3 :hug:
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OneMidnightRose Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
:)
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TegzyPuff97 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i don't know what to say to this... but it's so beautiful...
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JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you :heart:
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RabeaUmbra Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I teared up, I think you might have been talking about me.. <3
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JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
If you felt i was talking about you, then we must have alot in common, as i was talkinga botu myself... :heart:
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RabeaUmbra Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww <3 It was very well written too, I posted it on my facebook, it's linked so you get all the credits~!
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JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
:O you did?! wow!! Thanks!!
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love this, what I wouldn't give to have a guy write something like this for me,....amazing
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JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
I wrote this about myself :') I'm a girl XD
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha, I'm just saying, I would kill to have a guy write this about me ;)
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JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
I...would kill to have the guy i love within my reach.... :icondragonweep:
But i understand what you mean :)
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
and I understand what you meant there too.....I understand all too well
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JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
What poor souls we are :iconsighingplz:
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
We'll be okay though, I've got a feeling ;)
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JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
i've got a feeling, but i think it's mostly hunger and loneliness ._. heh :XD:

And thankful for the watch!!!

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jadamslh Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
Men aren't the only ones who don't know how they feel sometimes; it's mostly us, though. I think with women it's sometimes the same, but more often it's not that they don't know how they feel about something, it's a fear of the consequences of telling the truth.

Truth-telling is a double-edged sword, it conveys the power which comes from self control / self acceptance and also the responsibility for the consequences. If you tell the truth, you also accept the truth, and by implication, responsibility for changing what is true, if necessary.

That's big.

I live in a man's world, and it's a different world than a woman's, in that in my world a person is accepted for who he or she says they are until proven differently. It's a somewhat hard world, in which weakness is punished, cruelty accepted, and women are pursued as objects.

To view our half of reality differently is to place mollyswaddles on a jungle beast.

We can never know "her" without being "her", and in attempting to become "her" we lose the polar attraction of opposites. However, we can appreciate "her" in her caped ways, as she, appalled as she is at our ways, takes to us as a gull takes to the wind.
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RabeaUmbra Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I believe I know what you mean. Truth is, that the truth doesn't always set one free, in fact it can bind you and make you lose something, or someone precious. Though it will bring you closer to accepting reality, and makes you responsible. I believe I understand what you mean about mens' and womens' worlds, I don't know any guy that really "sees me" and actually wants said me. Also, that was deep, I loved it <3
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jadamslh Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012
Thanks, Silly. By the way, I think "silly" is a very underappreciated quality! There's a lightness of being, and a creativity and humor there that's a rare quality.

JetBlackHeartxxxwhatever pissed me off with her indirect and withholding style. It's women like her who set communication between the sexes back years.

Revealing ourselves is risky. If you're in touch with your feelings you can get smacked up with others' defenses. I don't know how to get the confidence to keep putting myself out there but I feel at last that I have to. I think I've seen some others do it, so I know it's possible. I'm not very courageous.
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JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
i'm sorry, but i do not have any idea what you are talking about, and i read it about 5 times :hmm: care to explain what you mean and why you posted it here?
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jadamslh Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012
A perfect example of why men and women have trouble communicating. Pardon me for being blunt: the intentionally ambiguous messages being sent in your "Honestly" piece cannot be seen in any other light than as manipulative and dishonest.

By not taking a position or expressing an opinion, you become the "withholding biatch" while making us men "demanding bastards".

Clear enough?
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JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Student Writer
No?
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shaunafaye Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I...I......Well...........I..LOVE..THIS! Awesome!
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JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
Ha ha! Thank you!!
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shaunafaye Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome
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trolol32 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
Glad you are back! And I believe you btw
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JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
what do you mean? o.o
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trolol32 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
I believe you when you say you are ok :)
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JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
okay....? i'm really confused
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trolol32 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
Why? :)
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ZerbaPaint Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow this is just amazing! It's nice to have some of your poetry again~!
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JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student Writer
What do you mean?
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ZerbaPaint Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student General Artist
I don't know. Haven't seen many of your poems around lately :I
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JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Writer
My last 5 submissions have been poems!! I havent been online for four or five days, that might be it :hmm:
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