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I. Love. You.

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I love you.

Such sweet,
Short words.
So much meaning,
So many emotions.

It doesn't merely mean,
I love you.

It also means i miss you.
That i miss you even more,
Every moment,
You are not near.

It means i trust you,
With all my heart,
That i will believe every word you throw my way,
That i believe you can achieve your every dream and endeavour.

But,
It also means i need you.
Right here.
Beside me for the rest of my life.

You are my love,
My confidant,
My dream i live for,
My life.

I love you.

Do you understand everything,
I mean by that now?
o.o

:icondonotuseplz::iconmyartplz:

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Chezzy-Am's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

In one simple, sweet, and generous composition, this composition speaks a truth that is so hard to describe because it is so much more. And yet, it hits what we feel brilliantly.

The restraining sheer of the ending, with the subtle opening makes this all the more satisfying to read... Its a powerful ebony of emotions, and a contemplation of this work leaves me only to agree with the opening itself

</i>Such sweet,
Short words.
So much meaning,
So many emotions.

It doesn't merely mean,
I love you.</i>

With the emphasis on the word love, it's a marvelous composition. Well done. Keep writing.