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The rain is falling,
My tears are pouring,
As i write this final dictation,
To you...

I guess you never knew,
I guess you never saw,
How miserable i was inside.

The pain i felt,
The  smiles i faked,
I guess life is one big game.

Game Over
Is flashing on the screen,
I'll be fading away,
All too soon.

I have no more lives saved up,
There are no cheat codes to type,
No restart button,
When it comes to this life.

I messed up,
And i am sorry,
For any pain i have caused you,
And any sorrow.

This is my final goodbye,
This is my game over,
I'm floating away,
And nothing stop me.
I hadn't posted anything for a while, and i felt bad....so....:shrug:

:icondonotuseplz::iconmyartplz:

JetBlackHeart
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:iconmoons-shadow10101:
Moons-Shadow10101 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012
it's a cool poem. I feel like some of it is a bit forced flow wise though.
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:iconjetblackheartxxx:
JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012  Student Writer
I'm having a bit of writers block :/ so it is forced...
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:iconmoons-shadow10101:
Moons-Shadow10101 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
lol. i hate it when that happens. XD
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:iconjetblackheartxxx:
JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Student Writer
SO DO I D8
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:iconcinders8328:
Cinders8328 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I hope this doesn't mean that you are leaving.
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:iconjetblackheartxxx:
JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012  Student Writer
No :) Just a poem. FOr now.
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:iconcinders8328:
Cinders8328 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
just making sure :)
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:iconjetblackheartxxx:
JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Student Writer
:3
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:iconcinders8328:
Cinders8328 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:llama:
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:iconjetblackheartxxx:
JetBlackHeartxxx Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Student Writer
:iconllama3dplz:
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