Anyone But Me

I have to get critical with you. I like the theme of the poem; it is a nice one of realization of the self and it is expressed well in your poem. It starts with a three liner and the rest are four liners. It is fine.

One little problem that I did have was that in four stanza's you have ended with "but me" and in the rest of the two it doesn't end that way. that way, the rhyming of "but me" looks like a mere repetition with no intent of being a good rhyme. So if you can alter it, DO alter it.

Otherwise a good poem over a good yet well discussed topic.